Love the story. I can’t believe people would treat you that way. It’s not like I’m gonna change the authors mind. Even if the mission was a simple one, to get voiceprints from this wealthy neighborhood, things were not just simple. Canon AU. I don’t think I’ve read things in any fandom with such wildly divergent views on the basic personalities of all the main characters. Found insideEndgame part 5. The Joker is back! The penultimate issue of the Clown Prince of Crime's horrifying return! Plus, in the backup story, the inmates and Mahreen finally learn the truth about the Joker! Tim had resources. He couldn't blame Tony for being sore at Ron. Categories: Gen Characters: Ari Haswari, Ziva David Genre: Angst, Character study . If I just can’t stand it, I used the damned back button. I think you gave a lot of fans out there, I for one Look forward to more of your work, sending you a virtual hug, a virtual wand to blast the flamers, and a big thank you for writing and sharing an amazing story with us. I sure as hell am not going to run around fandom trying to figure out every little nitpicky thing people do and don’t like so I can “tag my fic appropriately.”. Please ignore them and resume the awesome after glow of a completed fic. They should shut their mouth and stop reading fanfictions and let the others enjoy. It felt good having Gibbs shoulder some of the weight for once. Click. Maybe I’m just lazy, but I don’t get it. Gibbs, Ziva, McGee, Abby, and Ducky are the other wonderful, unique, incredible, and highly-valued characters on this show. This takes skill, creativity and empathy. Those degrees not important enough for you McGee? Just as I am looking forward to your final version of Emergence. I missed it first time and heard such good things about it, so really regretted not reading it on RT. / AngelicInsanity. Title: The Offer Author: kaylashay Rating: FR13 Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them. Tony nodded weakly against Gibbs' chest. Forget for a moment the recording she altered. That conversation though does not mean that you should fucking have a dumbass attack and try and fix Abby.”. Please don't sue because I have no money. Anthony Tony DiNozzo [NCIS] Dr Brad Pitt [NCIS] Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard [NCIS] Eli David [NCIS] Jackson Gibbs [NCIS] Jimmy Palmer [NCIS] . One-shot, pre-NCIS character study. New. Second: I’m with you with your comment about the “Dead Air – Thing”! I feel i have been remiss in not actually saying how much in enjoyed it….selfish of me just to take what you offered and repay it with nothing but silence. Tony squinted to read the words written in capitals, before his mouth opened wide. My favorite Larsen cartoon shows God in his workshop, with the earth on the bench in front of him. It would NEVER occur to me to warn I was dealing with Dead Air when putting warnings on one of my fics. I don’t know how, but someday I’ll do it.”. (I’ll ignore the idiocy and obnoxiousness of people whining to you about your portrayal since so many others above have covered that beautifully.). “Abby was at the very least out of touch with reality, but possibly a little crazy,” McGee continued uncertainly. Gibbs turned to Kate and McGee. Post "Slowly Fading Away", post s13 AU. Has that new woman… Callahan started givin’ you problems?”, Tony shook his head looking down at his plate of Orange Chicken with fried rice. Author's Note: This story takes place a month after Dead Air. I’m super sorry to hear that people were hassling you. The once sparkling green eyes, which normally held a bit of mischief, now lacked any emotion at all. Gibbs is a bastard with a heart of gold and always does what it ‘right’ [Gibbs is truly anything but perfect even if I do love the character there are aspects of him I detest]; Tony is a class clown with virtually no intelligence except for what he has retained from watching years of movies and tv [he could NOT be an official SFA if he did not hold the proper higher education degrees and Gibbs would never keep an idiot on his team for this length of time]; McGee is a McGenius with a heart of gold and has for more qualifications to be a SFA than Tony and will one day be the Director of NCIS [McGee can be casually cruel and vicious in his supposed teasing and he does not have the innate talent as an investigator that Tony has AND truly intelligent people do NOT need to shove their degrees and qualifications in everyone’s face]; Ziva David is a highly trained and intelligent Mossad-Princess-Assassin than can kill with a paperclip and can claim Gibbs has her stand-in daddy [Ziva with all her supposed assassin training cannot ‘blend in’ to save her life AND cannot hit the side of a barn with a gun in each HAND and her anger management issues have issues! Tim’s was a break in gone wrong. “On top of that McGee, Tony had six years of law enforcement experience before he joined the team including undercover work and detective work. Which is why I’ve written so many stories that feature Dead Air. The picture was a gun and a knife. Jenny had ordered Tony and Ziva away, and Tony had followed that order. There wasn’t any reasoning with the zealotry of crusaders, it’s the same with that sort of fan. The dead air aspect was such a small part of Journey but essential to the plot…it’s fiction people and the author can interpret it any damn way she pleases…and because JJ got it right is a most pleasant bonus!! I often wonder if certain people search the internet specifically for fic they know they’re not gonna like just to comment on that in a hateful way. Fanfic: Dead Air and Dead Hopes Ch 1, NCIS | FanFiction. Brainless? Please remember poor Pickle. Pingback: Dead Air Leads to Never-ending Possibilities Story Index | AngelicInsanity, Pingback: Dead Air – Chapter Sixteen: The Genius’ New Clothes, Facing Your Fears, and Where It All Began | AngelicInsanity. I have gone back and forth with the second section for months, and in the end felt that this is what needed to be told. no beta. I was quite pleased at how you addressed this, for however much it matters. Numb3rs/Avengers 1/X-Men Movieverse O3/NCIS Crossover. Jilly, don’t listen to people who just like to whine about everything. There are a lot more people out there who support you than there are idiots. Summary. I agree warnings for triggers are polite… everything else is up to an author. Tag to 'Dead Air'- what could have happened by the simple action of turning a switch. It’s cathartic, it’s healthy anger, and it’s probably saying what over half of us want to say to dumb shits like your most recent troll. Sorry for the protracted delay in approving/replying. I’m… You’re right. Jennyngibbsbelong2getha Fanfiction. And even when I’m upset, I’m usually pretty damned polite, even if do swear a fuck-ton. Does the mole have anything to do with it? Opening the bottle he filled his glass and took a sip. Now she has to deal with a dark secret from her past, a media firestorm, annoying teammates, a grumpy sentinel and a case that seems taken right out of a Stephen King novel. It was like a curtain had been drawn across them, leaving them dull and blank. Bugger off. (And if I hear one more POOR widdle Timmy, Tony is so mean to him….. oh Boo f*cking Hoo)… Tim is an arrogant little sh*t and needs to go back to cyber crimes where at least he will be of some use. In my opinion they weren’t even fixable and shouldn’t have been. Author: Stephie (sunshine-sean/ imaginative soul) Rating: mature. Can’t wait to read mor of your stories. Meanwhile, a daytime soap (which I dislike) would have milked that for YEARS! Mostly thank you for everything you do and share with us. I’m sorry I let everyone down. So, a lot of people were pissed off. Whether Dead Air, Better Angels or any other episode where the NCIS advisor must have been off the set during filming (my opinion anyway) I don’t feel that anyone should leave a flaming review. “You… you spoke to Probie before he died?” Tony asked quietly shocked. He was just getting sniffing the ice in the tray he’d taken out of the freezer when Gibbs came into the room. I makes me crazy when people try and justify or minimize Tim and Ziva’s actions. The AAA part made me laugh so much, that was so them. He and Cassie Yates, Tony's TAD replacement, climb out and wait for the FBI agents that will take Tony back to Quantico, Agents Morgan and Jareau, to join them. Nicky Jardaine. Still reeling from a devastating tragedy, Kit Garrett struggles to adjust to his fancy new prep school. “Yup.” This one Gibbs really wanted to say more about, but there was a large part of himself that didn’t think Tim deserved his wisdom. And again, I’m lazy. The thing is I LOVE Gibbs, Tony and Abby and yet I don’t like how they’d been written during Brennan’s run as showrunner. Some sins cannot be erased by any number of years or any amount of regret â€" a memory from a less-than-perfect childhood. “Spencer has me hooked on this orange cream soda. It’s your fic! She uses them once in a while. Actually, they’d probably answer “it was just a joke”. It’s not worth it. A nurse held a cup of water with a straw to Tony's lips and told him to drink slowly. I feel a little guilty that I enjoyed your rant when I know it was caused by a ton of frustration. They were his. Either way, chastising me for bad characterization was a poor choice. Dead Air is where I got disillusioned. I realy enjoy the fact that your stories are not formulaic and that I never know what will happen next. The jar is labeled “Jerks”. What exactly did you have to offer that I couldn’t get Abby to do, or shit for that matter Tony to do?”, When McGee snorted, Gibbs shot out of his seat, and had Tim pinned to the beam next to the workbench before the younger man knew what was happening. My guess is when he finally gets tired of NCIS all together he’ll end up working with them full time. Tony was going from door to door, knocking and talking and yes, flirting with everyone he came across simply because he wanted, no, needed to find out about the people pulling the strings. I actually rather enjoyed the way you handled it. People might consider it Ziva or McGee bashing, but they deserve everything they get for what they did to Tony. To McGee and Ziva and especially Abby. Found at the NCIS fanfiction.net section, at MTAC , or at author's livejournal . I respect you, Tim. You are a wonderful writer and I absolutely enjoy how you weave the characters together. For me to write in season 8 or beyond, I have to either make it AU where Dead Air didn’t happen, or deal with what the fallout would have been / should have been. I am sorry. Turn around and go back where you came from. OMG You really got bad luck with people picking up on your stories. “Since education seems to be all that you care about, just exactly what have you done to better yourself since you got your degrees at MIT? Most likely tortured like the three petty officers. The idiots who complain about every little thing that upsets them piss me off! It took him a bit to place the steps, because they hadn’t been to see him in almost two years. Thank you for your hard work on this and all your other stories; they’re wonderful, and you can be proud of your accomplishments! Title: The Offer Author: kaylashay Rating: FR13 Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them. He parks his NCIS sedan around the corner and a few houses down from Tony's backup. Prompt fills for the Rough Trade Big Short prompts. He’s in a committed relationship. Tony is attacked and calls on Gibbs for help. In addition, this analysis offers an introduction to author Charlaine Harris, whose popular Sookie Stackhouse novels were the inspiration for the television series, as well as a discussion of the role of the fan base and social media in the ... the falsification of feild work on The Big Bang Theory. “She’s getting out soon. Dragons!! Well, suck it up. Brava! So, a lot of people were pissed off. Special Agent Tony DiNozzo, NCIS." "Caleb Bishop, Sentinel/Guide Taskforce Commander." "Of course you are," Tony said. I mean, why was Tony the only one to canvas that entire neighborhood talking to hundreds of people in just a few hours. *feeds your bunnies*, Go you!!! I am in love with Ziva all over again and i loved and the second episode very much too!Copyright Disclaimer Under Section 107 of the Copyright Act 1976, allo. You rightly nailed the characters for their actions (i love fics that punish Z & M appropriately for it). Your new FBI issued phone. He didn't know that, but his life was about to change. You know I personally love this story. *bearhugs*, Well said. Chapter 17 The Twins Gibbs Sister Ncis Fanfiction. Found insideWhen a wealthy widow is found murdered, her married lover is accused of the crime. His only hope for acquittal is the testimony of his wife, proving his alibi. However, she has some secrets of her own to reveal. If it had been a real incident Tony should have reported them and they should have been removed from the team and a disciplinary actions taken, (demotion, leave with out pay, suspension, no longer able to work in the field or with out supervision). It’s fact, people. “You have no relationship. Director Vance doesn't like Tony - it doesn't bother Tony much but he's very aware of it - but Vance loves McGee. What I hear you say is that you don’t like that I took it more seriously than the writers or producers did. He didn’t want his true feelings revealed just yet. Geoph Essex's fast and fearless prose combines the wit of Douglas Adams, the quirk of Christopher Moore, and the inventive mythology of Neil Gaiman in an adventure that spans galaxies without ever straying too far from the familiar. This is me pissed off about people bitching over the way I handled the Dead Air stuff. If it’s any consolation, I loved your story. Thank you! This report assesses the annexation of Crimea by Russia (February–March 2014) and the early phases of political mobilization and combat operations in Eastern Ukraine (late February–late May 2014). She had photos of you on her walls. Maybe you should do the same? Found insideAn intimate portrait by the enigmatic comic's closest associates share secrets Kaufman wanted withheld until the deaths of his parents, discussing rumors about his "faked" death while offering behind-the-scenes insights into Man on the Moon ... I make no money. I hated the way that “Dead Air” was just brushed under the carpet, and people who just shrugged it off got my friggin’ goat! He was obviously not comfortable. Hawaii is behind her â until a hunt for an arms dealer brings her back to the island. I loved the story, could care less about the episode this came from, I happen to love the way it was done and thank you muchly for taking the time to write such a lovely fic and can’t wait for more from you. “I’m guessing that this has something to do with McGee and Ziva’s deaths?” Gibbs asked in confirmation, and Tony shrugged playing with the food on his plate. If other “fans” are too… Thick? R for violence and bad language (pre-slash) NCIS/The Sentinel: Tony comes home from a solo camping trip only to discover an overwhelming awakening in his senses. As far as Abby goes, I am sure. As far as I am concerned, If ya can’t say something nice… At that moment though he still had hope that eventually Tim would work things out. That was the nail in the coffin episode for me with NCIS and I adore the way you handle it in this magnificent story. He finally admitted softly refusing to look up from his food. He hadn't eaten or slept in days. You never leave your partner with out back up and that’s what they did by turning off the radio. Could have had a nice “revenge will not make your kid any less dead and I don’t want to send you to jail” speech. It shows two men in love without resorting to over the top and out of character actions and reactions. Though, in Gibbs' mind, Tony was more at fault. You never knew from week to week if you’d wind up with characterization whiplash. Okay, *I* gave up on NCIS when Mike Franks murdered the man who killed his son and Gibbs just stood there and let him do it. So, what’s up? Sentinels and Guides are Known AU. Leave and find something that will suit you more. Summary: Tim's and Kate's disrespect and insubordiantion causes Tony to make a drastic decision. Tony DiNozzo/Steve McGarrett/Jethro Gibbs, Two people murdered while broadcasting live on the radio, Tony, Ziva and McGee go to the neighborhood where the cell is suspected to be and Tony runs around doing whatever he can to get everyone to talk to him so they can get the voiceprints. "Because of the car accident," Tim returns after a minute. You and I both know though that if you give her an inch she’s gonna take a hundred miles.”, Gibbs took a deep breath, and drank more of the soda before speaking again. When he looked at Vance, the Director was shocked at the change in the man. Tony has been away from NCIS for the entire summer, until a case from his early days as an agent comes back to haunt him and he has to return to D.C in order to keep his family safe. Hey lady. But then there are certain other things that should have been addressed differently or better in canon. Even if it does happen, it will not be your fault. Enjoy. Found insideIt's a story set in a world of uncertainty and revolutionary upheaval, where a 10-year-old swears allegiance to Lenin, Marx and the legendary Che Guevara under swaying palm trees, with no idea of what it all means, except this is the only ... He dropped his hand from Tony's cheek and reached for a glass. I actually thought you dealt with “Dead Air” in a very logical, even restrained way – you didn’t go overboard, you didn’t make it a Dead Air Angstfest, like some authors do (and even if you did, your choice). The home of the Criminal Minds Bang and Reverse Bang! It really annoyes me we people conplain when a story dose not go as they thought it would. "It's over, Tony. by angie. He was a little incredulous, and was pretty sure McGee was either being obtuse, or lying all together. Almost any outcome, to me, is better than the betrayal of your partner being laughed off as funny. Its unique pairings were fun and enlightening. First published Jan 22, 2015. Sorry, now I’m babbling. After Jethro's joke at his expense, Tony has had enough and quits NCIS. Also, I hope you have access to cupcakes or similar, because you definitely deserve one, both for having to put up with obnoxious bastards as well as on general principle. It’s YOUR BLOODY STORY. I know there are plenty of people who are fans of Ziva-Tony and this ficiton will be great for them. Specifically timed to coincide with the release of Kevin's new film: Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back! (August 2001) This story is culled directly from what will become one of the summer's biggest smash releases! Sorry you have to put up with those kind of comments. Let em have it!!!!!!. LOL. "You sap," Tony told him, voice fond. You don’t have to make life miserable for the author. Tomorrow night it’s me and a nice glass of wine with 22 chapters of fanfic to love. It's an ill-kept secret at NCIS that Vance much prefers the type of agent that McGee is, with his advanced degrees and . I definitely fall into the category of fans that did not like ‘Dead Air’ and the lack of follow-up/consequences for McGee and David. I love your writing and I’m sorry you have to deal with self-entitled asshats who think you should bow to their whims. Sorry that even here people can be nasty, I thought it was a wonderful story, for the time frame it was set in Dead Air was the perfect back drop story, highlight the level of disrespect TIM AND Ziva had for Tony, yes lots of “Dead Air” stories but your story was so much more then that. When a NCIS investigation turns explosive, FBI Agent John Sheppard and his team are called in. You tell ’em. After a terrorist attack during her second stint on the USS Seahawk as an agent afloat, Toni DiNozzo goes missing and is presumed dead. Sort by: Hot. Canon AU. Thank you for all your hard work and dedication in writing some great stories and sharing them with us. Live Man Talking An Ncis Fanfic By Cosmic. The thing about a long running show like NCIS is coming up with more drama. If you liked it or didn’t like, it doesn’t matter to me. Well, I don’t even know if this makes sense or you care, but I repeat my plead for you to not let morons, weirdos, idiots and (fill in more less child friendly characterizations of people) stop you! I should stop there, but I’m just going to explore what would have happened differently if I’d chosen to make Dead Air not happen rather than deal with it. "Let's have some fun.". Spoilers: Up to early Season 4 of NCIS, pre-series for NCIS:NO, up to Season 2 for Criminal Minds, no spoilers for Numb3rs Summary: Two months into Tony's run as team leader after Gibbs' departure for Mexico, Jenny Shepard realizes things are not going well for the MCRT and decides to intervene. McGee, get these people out of here." If they have problems with others interpretations of how Dead Air should be handled, they should just go write their own fic. . It takes him less than 90 minutes to raze it to the ground. I could help her get a job somewhere? I was one of those viewers who barely even noticed the “canon” bit when the show aired, because ever since the show started to shark-jump, I’ve been only half-paying-attention. ), This essay was really helpful in clarifying what happened on the show. Alternate ending to “Dead Air†. Don’t like it then get off your lazy ass and write it your way. Tony's hands fumbled for Gibbs', and Gibbs wondered how aware Tony was. Suddenly, the kindly gentleman the team knew has disappeared, replaced by a man with a different accent and attitude, a man who is friends with U.N.C.L.E. Responsibility and blame are not the same things. Like… six months or something. Let’s think about what happened to get her arrested, and her bail revoked.”, Tony nodded shortly and took a deep breath. After a petty officer was found dead, the NCIS team learned that one of the men suspected of killing him was medically treated in Sudan. In your version, there were at least some mitigating circumstances for Ziva and McGee, which, while they don’t excuse their behavior, at least provide a logical explanation as to how it even came to that – there is no such thing in canon. Crossover with Criminal Minds and Magnificent Seven (TV). Be the man Tony thought you were when you shot that cop. I’m at the point that I watch for lovely moments and totally ignore the things that could make me frustrated or angry. Just wanted to echo everyone else’s support for you over this issue. It's only when you take it from its habitat and plant it because it looks pretty that is takes over and kicks your ass. to increase the amount of fan fiction. You wanna fix this? Particularly Abby and Tony. January 5, 2017. You think I didn’t fucking notice, McGee? I’ve been reading fic for years, and Emergence is the first story to get me emotionally involved enough to post a comment, and Journey was the first fic I have ever read while it was still WIP and being posted (waiting and I are not friends, but well-written Tony/Jack? Gibbs held his phone up. But the writers were continually abusing Tony and promoting Ziva and Tim’s nasty, childlike behavior. I agree with you. One sign of an excellent story is that it’s one that compels people to want to re-read it to revisit the characters in that setting. I’m so sorry that the jerks of the internet came crawling out of their deep, dark and smelly hole to ruin your posting afterglow. I just stay away from it most the times. Authors don’t have to apologize for anything they write. The way is was just a throw away laugh that Tony is so annoying that no one should have to listen to him made it even worse. I've only found this community today. Tony shook his head and closed his eyes briefly, then stood up. 'Ziva,' replied Gibbs. “What? I hope you have a happy and safe 2017. Like maybe if he didn’t and she got hurt or killed people would blame him. Colonel was tall, the Marine uniform was flawless, as was the honey blond hair tied into a strict bun. I can tell you that he wanted to, but he just… he ran out of time. Who knows?! There was a LOT of ranting in the fandom about it. Off to read Journey again because YES it is THAT amazing and gets better every time I read it!!!! Lucy Coe, the once mousy librarian who turned into a villainous liar, schemer, vixen and unlikely heroine takes us on a tour of Port Charles where, she says, you're as likely to encounter a den of not-so-secret agents as you are a gold ... The best way to deal is either ignore them or Pickle their asses, depending on how egregious their jerkiness. I eventually believed in you, but Tony believed in you first. I warn for certain things out of courtesy because I don’t want people to get triggered. I do find it weird in ncis when characters don’t make a bigger deal out of things. Abby, help him with that after you run those finger prints. Mid October 2010 - Dead Air Happens. Still, he should have stopped Franks. In the middle of this is young Riku, who receives a cell-phone call and soon finds himself between the Kanshu and these warriors, who fight under the acronym F.L.A.G. Riku's adventure and the young humanoid creature hatched from the "cocoon ... “I… I feel like I need to try again with Abby.”. I understand your annoyance, but don’t let them get you down. What had he been thinking, letting Tony go undercover like that? I’m making an exception for the precious snowflakes who are giving me a hard time about Dead Air, so here’s my rant on the subject. It sucks this ignorance and stupidity was vented towards you. This updated edition includes a focus on the show's female characters in addition to bringing the content up to date through the show's seventh season. "Kate, get Ducky. And reading various “Dead Air” fics (which I generally love) really cemented that fact for me. Alternate Universe. Return To Stillwater by Jackilee : After Tony finds out that they turned off the mic during the episode he goes to see Gibbs's Dad. In any case, I think you’re spot on about the show being all over the place in terms of characterization, and that being the reason why the characters are portrayed across such a huge spectrum in fanfiction. Born to an unknown mother and father, and the niece of former SECNAV Phillip Davenport, 'E.J.' grew up in an unknown area where she spent some time as a cheerleader during high school. Thank you for dropping by! I loved Journey, and I can’t wait to read the eventual sequel. What a minute did I just hijack this post? OMG!! But the bad guys are not the only demons he's fighting. His peripheral vision wasn’t what it used to be though. Stop wastin’ time, and fix it. I’m sorry that you got such backlash from your story because you addressed something that has upset me since it first aired. All comments are moderated—the reason for this is under Site Info | Comments & Feedback. You broke it. Oh, and Tony, the rest of the evidence from PFC Wilson's apartment needs to be logged before we can turn it over to Abby." “I really fucked up. And, speaking of that… what are you doing again, McGee?”, The younger man hadn’t moved from where Gibbs had slammed him, and was currently studying the floor as if life’s answers would pop out of it. “I understand, boss. “Journey Home” is fantastic, it’s one of the best (or even the best) Sentinel crossover/fusions that I know. The events in the show leave so many avenues for exploration. - -Youtube sensations. - Self-driving Priuses. - Rogue FBI agents. - Mad scientists. - Homecoming. - Spring break. - Prom. - And . . . Jennifer Lawrence. Notice how I put Jennifer Lawrence last. She's in the book, so it's not cheating. Tibbs Slash. How you internalize and interpret those events… that's the debatable part. Your story more than delivers this. I’ve heard some horror stories about militant fans taking their denial ten steps too far. that hurts….]. CapriciousT. Jilly, please don’t listen to the idiots out there. I myself am against Ziva-Tony fics, but it doesn’t give me a right to go and criticise every single author who wrote such fanficiton. ( Log Out / A pox on the douchebags who dared to take away your end of story buzz! Be the man he always believed would be his SFA when he took over for me when I retire.
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